TOPIK Essay Writing Guide (쓰기 가이드)- Beginner Level

In the previous post, we looked at the evaluation system of TOPIK essay section. If you remember I had left you with three model essays which were written by three different students in 25th TOPIK. Here in this post, we will see how the examiners evaluated and graded those papers. Analyze the evaluation charts properly and try to find why one essay got more marks than others. I hope it will help you make your TOPIK essay better and get some more marks. All the best…
Here is the essay question that came in beginner level of 25th TOPIK:
Q46. 다음을 읽고 150~300자로 글을 쓰십시오. (30점)
여러분은 누구를 만나고 싶습니까? 그 사람을 왜 만나고 싶습니까? 그 사람을
만나서 무엇을 하고 싶습니까? 여러분이 만나고 싶은 사람에 대해 쓰십시오.
Below is the first model essay: 

And here is how the TOPIK examiners evaluated it:

Second model essay

And here is how the TOPIK examiners evaluated it:

 

Third model essay: 

And here is how the TOPIK examiners evaluated it: